Saturday, October 8, 2011

Shit's about to Hit the fan...

I'm sorry for the wait but i needed to get this chapter right. I really hope you like this chapter. Well enjoy! =)


Previously on Beautiful Mistake...


"Nicki you have to pull yourself together babe." Safaree said pulling her into his arms. "You and the babies will be fine. If they have to come out early then so be it. That doesn't mean they won't be healthy." She was still sobbing.

"It's just that they are coming into this world with complications and I don't want that for them. I want their lives to be normal."
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"Mom I'm so scared." Nicki wrapped her arms around her mothers neck. Mrs. Carol rubbed her back.

"Everything is going to be fine. But Nicki if the doctor thinks it's best you need to listen to her. And from what you have told me about her she has nothing but your best interest at heart. Also you need to go talk to Safaree. That man doesn't know what to do right now. He is so worried about you Onika. You can't keep pushing him away when things are going bad in your life. These are his kids as well. Did you ever stop to think how this is affecting him? I spoke with his mother and he has called her crying because he is worried about the babies and you. He doesn't know what to do. You and the babies are his family Nicki he wants to protect you all but he can't do that if you push him away. "
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"It's a surprise baby shower. Your mom, Candi, Lauren, and Tyesha put it together." Nicki looked around the room at all the people who were there. All her close friends from childhood where there. Of course her Young Money family was there. Safarees family was there as well. She looked over at the table at all the gifts that where on it.


"I never thought the day would come to where you couldn't be with me alone in a room Nicki." Nicki looked at him weirdly.

" Drake i'm sorry don't get angry." She put her hand on his arm and he snatched away.

"I tried being nice. I'll see you around Nicki." he went and grabbed his jacket and left. Safaree walked up to her.
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Nicki heard a loud screech and a car come to a halt. She turned around and saw three big guys coming her way. They reached out and grabbed her.

"SAFAREE. SAFAREE HELP ME."


Now Back to Your Regularly Scheduled Story... 





"Whe...Where am I?" she said trying to open her eyes. Nicki heard a voice.

"Your a few miles out of the city." Nicki looked up to see who it was.

"Melanie? What's going on?" Nicki asked trying to keep her eyes open. It was smoky in the room from Melanies cigarette.


"Nicki you don't look so well." Melanie said placing the back of her hand on Nickis face then circling around her.

"What happened? Where is Safaree?" She said looking around the room.

"Stop asking all these questions. I'm in charge." Melanie snapped at her. Nicki was scared she tried moving her hands but they were tied behind her back.

"Melanie just let me go please?" Nicki pleaded.

"Where was this person a couple weeks back huh? Then you were big bad Nicki, now look at you, pathetic. What does he see in you? What does either of them see in you?"

"Who are you talking about Melanie?" Nicki said crying.

"You'll find out soon enough. I think I'll just let you sit here for awhile and think about your actions." Melanie said putting out her cigarette on the ground then blowing the smoke in Nickis face. Nicki had a coughing spell while Melanie laughed and walked out the door. Nickis mind was racing a mile a minute, she was trying to come to grips with her reality at the moment.

Back @ Nickis House


"I shouldn't have left her." Safaree said pacing the floor. He  was so confused on what to do at this point. When they reached the cars after Nicki was snatched there was a note saying if he contacted the police they would kill Nicki and not to test them because they had them under surveillance. He didn't want to call Nickis parents because they would panic and call the cops for sure.

"Man they said they would call around midnight." Martin said looking at his watch. "That's in 10 minutes. Im not saying don't panic but you need to calm yourself until then okay Man?"

"Man I hear you." Safaree said sitting on the couch next to Lauren.

"It will be okay SB. You know Nicki is probably thinking of ways to get out of the situation as we speak. She won't be playing victim you know she likes to be the Shero." Lauren said trying to ease Safarees mind. He smiled but he was still nervous as hell. His phone rang. He answered it yelling.

"Listen hear you simple bastards if you lay a hand on her I swear to God I will end your life on sight when i find you." Safaree said.

"Whoa Safaree it's just me Melanie. What's with all the hostility?"

"Melanie? What do you want?"

"I just wanted to apologize for the way that I acted last time we saw each other. It was childish and also wanted to pay for all the damages I caused to your car that day." Safaree was irritated.

"Listen Melanie I forgive you and all that but right now is not the time. I'm waiting on a very important phone call." he sighed frustrated.

"Well you sound down Safaree, you want me to come over and keep you company."

"No Melanie. I have a girl to do that for me. I told you I can't see you anymore what part of that don't you understand."

"Safaree don't speak to me like that I'm trying to be nice." Safaree was Livid by now. That sounded like what Nicki said Drake told her at the Baby shower.

"Listen here I'm sick of niggas going around saying they tryin to be nice." He hopped up off the couch. "FUCK your niceness. I'm sitting here telling you that I have shit to do and you keep fucking running your mouth." Candi snatched the phone from him.

"Trick you see he don't want to talk to your psychotic ass so I suggest you do yourself a favor and lose this fucking number."

"Who the fuck you think you talking to you low class bitch?"

"Bitch I'll show you low class. Run me yo address you jump off." Candi was hyped. Safaree took the phone out of her hand.

"Melanie just don't call me again."

"You'll be sorry you didn't treat me right." Melanie said in a low chilly voice and hung up. Safaree looked at the phone.

"What she mean by that?" he said to himself.

"Yo it's 5 til Midnight." Rex said. Everyone in the room got quiet. Safaree went to go find his charger to make sure it didn't cut off during the conversation.

Around the same time


Nicki had been sitting in the room for hours now and had to pee badly. She figured out she was in an abandoned apartment building. It was really cold since it was starting to get late. Nicki heard yelling coming from somewhere, then foot steps. The door swung open and slammed against the wall Nicki jumped. Melanie was standing there with mascara running down her cheeks and breathing heavy while staring Nicki down.

"Why does he care about you so much?"

"Who Safaree?"

"Why can't he just let you go, you can't love him the way I can."

"Melanie we have been best friends since we were teenagers. You are never going to break our connection." Melanie was in front of Nicki on a flash. She drew her hand back and slapped Nicki across the face. If she wasn't tied to the chair she would have fallen from the chair to the floor.

"Don't tell me what I won't be able to do. Your just some little two bit tramp that lucked up and got signed. I know plenty of other girls that would body you on a track. There is nothing special about you." Nickis face stung and was turning red, she was pissed. Not only had this girl just slapped her but she was disrespecting her and she couldn't do anything back.

"Ooo Bitch if i wasn't tied up, you lucky just know that." Nickis leg was shaking out of anger and she still had to pee.

"You better watch your fucking mouth, you don't have any power here. You can't manipulate me like you do them."

"WHO are you talking about you simple bitch?" Nicki spat back at her.

"You'll find out when i'm ready to find out." Melanies alarm on her phone went off indicating that it was now midnight. She went outside the door and picked up a small bag and pulled out some duct tape. She pulled a piece off and put over Nickis mouth. Then pulled out another cell phone, a small voice disguising device and placed it over the phone and called Safarees Number blocked.

"Hello?" SB said.

"Hello is this Safaree?"

"You know who this is you called my phone."

"I would think you would be nicer to the person who has your girls life in their hands." Melanie pulled out a white & silver switchblade and pressed the button to release the blade. She twirled it in the air looking at it. "Do you love her Safaree?" She walked over to Nicki and ran the blade against her neck without cutting her. Nicki squealed with tears streaming down her face.

"Yes!... Yes I love her. Don't hurt her." Safaree said choking back tears hearing Nicki squeal. Melanie heard the sadness in his voice and it angered her more. She just didn't understand why he picked Nicki over her.

"If u ever want to see this little bitch again or your kids being born. When I call back in three days with my demands you better meet them."

"Let me hear her voice please." Safaree pleaded but Melanie hung up. She walked over to Nicki and ripped the tape from her mouth.

"You fuckin Bitch!" Nicki yelled. Melanie slapped her again.

"Watch your mouth, and you might live a little longer than I planned." Melanie said.

2 Days Later


"You gotta call her parents Safaree." Lauren said. Safaree had not slept in the past two days. He needed to know that Nicki was safe and didn't feel right doing so until he did. He ran his hand over his face.

"Yeah I know but I can't tell them over the phone. Im going fly them out here on the private and tell them face to face. Let me go call them now." He walked off into Nickis room and shut the door.

"Hello Mrs. Maraj."

"Hello Safaree, and what do I owe this pleasure? Is my daughter acting up again? You have my permission to bop her." Mrs. Maraj laughed to herself.

"Um Mrs. Maraj I need you and Mr. Maraj to fly out here tonight. I have a private jet ready for you to board. And I thinks it's best if you leave Ciah at home.." Safaree said with a shaky voice.

"Safaree what's wrong child?"

"I need you to come here please and I'll explain everything. It's an emergency."

"There's nothing wrong with the babies is there Safaree."

"No there is nothing wrong with the babies."

"We'll be there what time is the jet leaving?"

"When ever you get there and board."

"We'll be there in the next half hour. When we get there be ready to explain yourself Safaree."

"Yes ma'am I will." Mrs. Maraj hung up the phone. After a couple moments of silence there was a knock on the bed room door then it opened.

"How did it go?" Lauren said.

"Their on their way. Lauren how am I going to tell them there only daughter was kidnapped and it's all my fault?"

"Safaree you can't blame yourself for this hunnie." she rubbed his back.

"Lauren I should have never left her by herself."

"How were you suppose to know that was going to happen SB? We were all having a good time."

"I should have been there to protect her. Lauren you didn't see her face when they snatched her. She was terrified and her voice when she screamed for me and I couldn't get there in time." Lauren began to tear up thinking about her best friend being in danger. Safaree looked over at her. "Lauren don't cry please, your the one that has to be strong remember." He said hugging her. She nodded her head and tried to stop crying.

Same Day Miles Away


"I have to pee." Nicki said for the third time that hour. Melanie looked over at her.

"You just peed 15 minutes ago."

"I'm pregnant, what do you expect or am I the first pregnant woman you have snatched?" Nicki was over being scared of Melanie. She came to the conclusion that she was all talk.

"Actually you are, the last one wasn't pregnant." Nicki and Melanie locked eyes.

"What do you mean LAST one?"

"Just what I said."

"What is this a hobby for you?" Nicki asked.

"No. Only when someone stands in the way of me and my man. You had your chance with Safree and you messed up. Then when I get him you wanna waltz your yellow ass back into his life and feed him all type of bullshit."

"It's not bullshit. I love him."

"Whatever Nicki. You don't love him you just don't want anyone else to have him." Melanie looked at her in disgust. "He told me about how when he told you his feelings you shut him down. Then he got with, what was that girls name? Shante yeah that's her name. When he got with Shante you started acting brand new. Acting all jealous and talking about how you love him. Then you get him and leave him. If that a selfish ass bitch then I don't know what is." Nicki was crying at the way Melanie portrayed her, as person she wasn't. "Do you like playing with men's feelings Onika?" Melanie walked over to her and grabbed her chin to make Nicki look at her. "You played with Drakes emotions and you played with Safarees. Does it make you feel better as a woman to know you can make a man feel low?"

"It's Not true." Nicki said. "I'm not that person. I love Safaree with everything in me."

"So that's why you treated him like shit because you LOVE him? That makes TONS of sense."

"NO! I just needed time to get my head clear." she sniffled.

"And what about Drake, Huh?"

"I love Drake as well but as a brother. I've told him that, he knows." Melanie walked to the door.

"Oh does he now? Well I think he thought something totally different."

"How do you know what he thinks? You don't even know him." Nicki said.

"Really?" She opened the door and leaned over the creaky banister. "Hey, come up." Nicki heard footsteps on the stairs. Nicki looked at the door way confused at to who she was motioning for. Until he walked in the room.

"Drake?"

Back @ Nickis house hours later


"Candi just called and said she is about to pull up with Nickis parents." Rex said. Everyone had been at Nickis house with Safaree. They were all worried about Nicki and wanted to stay in the know about the situation. Candi walked through the door with a couple bags in her hand along with the Marajes behind her. The men rushed to help Mrs. Maraj and Candi with the bags.

"Can yall take those up stairs to their room and give us a minute." They all nodded and headed upstairs. "How was your flight?" Safaree asked leading them into the front room.

"It was fine Safaree just tell us what's going on." Mr. Maraj said. "Where is Nicki?" he looked around to see if he had missed her.

"That's what I wanted to talk to you about sir. See the other day there was an incident and I left her...but it was just for a minute...we were all out trick or treating you know. And she didn't want to climb the steps so I told her i would be right back." Safaree was now crying. "and they took her. I'm so sorry... i promised you i would protect her and I didn't."

"Safaree who took her?" Mrs. Maraj asked hysterical.

"I don't know. It was three big dudes that grabbed and put her in the back...back of a van and drove off. And then they left a note on my car and said not to call the police or they would kill her. I'm sorry."

"Safaree how many days ago was this?" asked Mr. Maraj.

"Two days ago sir."

"What do they want with Nicki?"

"I don't know. The person on the phone said they would call back in three days two days ago."

"Well we will just have to wait till tomorrow to see what they want." Said Mr. Maraj. "Carol you have to calm down. You crying is not going to bring Nicki back anytime soon." He began walking her upstairs as Candi and Lauren came walking down the stairs. Safaree was in a trance.

"She screamed for me and I couldn't get to her." he laid his head in his lap and continue to cry out what he had been holding up for the past two days. Mr. Maraj turned and looked at him.

"Girls can you take her to the room I need to talk to Safaree alone."

"Yes sir. Come on Mama Carol everything will be alright." Lauren said. Mr. Maraj walked over to Safaree.

"Son look at me." Safaree looked up through blurred vision. "You can't blame yourself for this. You have to pull yourself together. We don't want to upset mama Carol do we?" Safaree sniffled.

"No sir." he wiped his face.

"Good. Now i'm only sayin this because I love you, go take a shower boy. You smell like the dead." Safaree smirked. He always loved Mr. Maraj humor when nobody else did.

"Yes sir." Truth was he hadn't showered or shaved in days.

"Alright." he patted Safaree on his back. "You gotta look good for my daughter when we get her back. And Safaree we ARE getting her back don't you worry about that." Safaree nodded and went upstairs to shower.

Back Outside the City

"Nicki."

"Drake please help me she's crazy." Nicki pleaded to Drake.

"Why is she tied up? That's not what we agreed too." Nicki was confused.

"Drake." she looked from him to Melanie. There was a moment of silence. "You knew about this?" she had a look of hurt on her face.

"Awww poor Nicki, you look betrayed." Melanie said putting on a sympathetic face.

"Why Drake?"

"Can you give us a minute?" Drake asked Melanie. She rolled her eyes and left the room. "Nicki I never wanted it to go this far. I just wanted to talk to you and you just wouldn't listen."

"So you have that psychotic bitch snatch me?"

"I didn't want this for you." he ran his hand across her face, she jerked away.

"Don't touch me asshole."

"Nicki don't be like that. Just talk to me Nicki."

"YOU WANNA TALK? FINE LET'S TALK. WHAT'S ON YOUR MIND?" Nicki shouted.

"Why can't you act the way you use to when we first met? You were never like this?"

"Oh I don't know maybe because you didn't KIDNAP me back then."

"I know I fucked up Nicki. It's that I care about you and Safaree has you acting brand new towards me."

"You think? Drake i'm five months  pregnant, and you pull this bullshit. Yeah you really care about me." She was pissed. "How could you do this? How thirsty can you be?" she wouldn't even look at him. "I am pregnant by ANOTHER man. Drake let it go." Nicki was over all the drama right now. She just wanted to go home.

"Nicki I'm sorry." He had no other words. "I'll just untie you and take you home. I'll suffer the consequences." he went around to untie her. Click. They both looked up to see Melanie standing there with a gun aiming in their way.

"I'm sorry Drake I can't let you do that. See if you let her go then she will tell everyone i was in on this and I can't have that. Come on, move away from her."

"Melanie just let her go, It's over."

"What's over? I still don't have Safaree."

"And you never will girl." Nicki said. Melanie pointed the gun at her. Drake stepped in front of her.

"Oh now you care about my well being. This nigga." Nicki said rolling her eyes. He looked back at her.

"Fellas come escort Mr. Graham out. I know he knows better than to run and tell anyone." The three men that snatched Nicki came into the room and grabbed Drake up. He struggled but he was no match for them. Melanie moved to Nickis right side. "Oh and if I see a cop car within a 100 mile radius of this place I will not hesitate to slice this bitch from here to here." The men stopped and Drake turned to look, Melanie took the gun and tapped the right side of Nickis stomach then her left side. The men proceeded to take Drake out of the building. Drake knew he had fucked up and was going to have to fix it. The question was How?

*This is my first time writing anything Suspenseful. Am I doing a good job at it or am I completely missing it? I need your feedback so I can give you good chapters. Are you guys getting bored with the story? Oh and as for Mr. Maraj I don't want yall to think he was affected by what Safaree said that's not the way I wan't you to see it but I needed someone to be level headed. Anyway Ri Ri... I appreciate all comments so please leave them or hit me on twitter in a DM and let me know what you think. Until next time
                    -ITSMARTHABITCH 


VISUALS

Melanies Switchblade & Gun.






24 comments:

  1. Okay your a great writer your doing amazing. But about this chapter im lost for words and im actually really praying that nothing happens to her. Melanie i got 1 question are you ready to die?! If anything happens to HB i will beat every Melanie i come in contact with for the rest of my life to take this anger out! lol im sorry im just a lil upset or alot. And Drake i am going to cut ur bawls owf with finger nail clippers so you can suffer if anything happens to her or the babies! And Melanie i will cut you breast off with finger nail clippers piece by piece. You betta believe that! ~ Love Always, CareBear :-)

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  2. Martha ur doing great. Melanie bitch I will leave yo crazy ass in a body bag! Don't fuckin play with me! Keep ya dick beaters off of Nicki's face! If u hurt her... God plz dnt let me come across a Melanie cus like @MyThoughts said I will beat da shit outta every Melanie I come across. & Drake! U dumb stupid ass fuck! I hate u in dis story, u're so fuckin stupid! Now all of a sudden u care?! Bullshit! Fuck u! If something happens to her or da babies :'( OMG...Safaree, Lauren & Mama Maraj was making me sad with all those tears :( Drake punk ass betta go into hideout because if SB find out he had anything to do w/ this he's road kill. Amazing chapter I can't wait to see what happens next. Post soon k? :)

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  3. Your first time writing suspense my ass. Oh hell fucking no, I knew the bitch was crazy from the beginning. Ooooo and then the bitch slapped my nic nac, its time this bitch go down. Poor sb blaming himself, but -_- at him not washing his ass for two days. Now martha idk how you gon bring this bitch down, but for me, since you love me, anywhere in the taking down of this psychotic bitch, you have candi and lauren tag teaming that ass non fucking stop, and when get tired of swinging let them hold her arms and legs down so nic can get a piece, I mean it's still fair cuz nic was tired up when she slapped, plus she was talking big shit on the phone tuh. I know was in straight slice a bitch mode last chapter, it's pretty safe to say I'm in a different mode now. *thinks* whats more severe than slicing a bitch without killing them. Hmmm whatever it is bitch thats what I am right now. I've said all I can say so consider this martha :p. Great chapter post soon.

    P.S did I mention how much I can't stand this delusional, psycho, waste of sperm. She has officially agitated my dots, ugh fucking low life.

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  4. Excuse my typos, ghatdamn touchscreen

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  5. You are an Amazing writer and the suspense had me on the edge. I wanted to cry so bad but I'm w/ my mom..this lady would think I'm bipolar or somethin lol!
    I H8 Melanie w/ a DEEP PASSION..STUPID SLUT PHYSCO BXTCH UGGGGHH! She disgusts me!! As 4 Drake..I knew he had somethin to do it..Idc IF he just wanted to talk..he caused this to happen to Nicki! He shall have Hell to pay. Both of those delusional idiots need body bags waiting on them!!!! I feel so bad 4 Safaree though..*sad face*
    Nicki needs to get back to safety ASAP!!!
    BTW Fly came on while Im commenting.
    Perfect lyrics 4 this....Then Say Somethin by Drake..*destroys radio* Ok Great SUSPENSFUL chapter!!! I hope everything turns out ok...except Drake and Melanie's safety.... xoxo Post SOON :)

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  6. You are doing a WONDERFUL job at this suspense shit!! These chapters aren't getting boring at all! Nor have they ever been! Im always on the edge when I read ur chapters, you're good at what you do :) Ok, comment plot time.

    BIIIIIITCH!!!! You don't do dat!!! She's pregnant you stupid fuck!!! Nd thas disrespectful!! Blowin smoke in somebody's face!!! Who the fuck do you think you are?!?!?!?! Who R yooooouuuuu BITCH!!!!!! >,<

    -_- No really Safaree? Dymb ass.... Of all placex, the bottom of a hill was safest? Mmm....

    Ok... wait.... I enjoy Safaree tellin this bitch off nd puttin her in her kennel, but unbeknownst to him... That bitch has all four of his babies hostage :( *Nicki voice* I'ont like this Marty...

    This. Muthafuckin. Bitch. Did. NOT jus slap mi Nicki!!!!!!!!!!! Oooo!!!!!! We whippin A$$!!!!! We whippin A$$ tonite!!!!!!

    :(((((((((((((((((((((((((( I'm havin a meltdown!!!!!!! I've hit that point where I cn't take his psycho no mo :( Why Drake can't b crazy frim a distance?!????? :((((( *sniffles* Why he gitta b crazy at all Marty?! :((((( Why Drake gotta have a part in this crazy kidnappin shit?! *wipes tears* Whyyy??? :(((( *composes self* Ok..... I think... I think I'm ok :( I caught miself, I hafta remember that I'm reading an OnikaFaree.... Drake's the "enemy" here :( *sniffles* I'm good...

    Eeeeeyyyyeeeeeeeewwwwwwww!!!!!!! Thas nasty Safaree! I understand the hurt, but thas no reason to b a dirty boy. Go shower, scrub EVERYTHING!! Twice if u need to. *holds nose nd hands him a wash cloth*

    O.O ok..... somebody gon die nd I kno it ain't Nicki. *sniffles* I'll gi call his mama :(((( Why Marty? *snuffles* Whyyyyyyy?!?? D:

    Oh. Maybe I wuz wrong :/ Ok.... I love Drake (not this character) but um... I'd rather mutt face shot his ass... U cn't have crazy bitch near Nic wita loaded gun.... Plus Drake a stupid muhfucka for even takin part in this sheeiiiit!!! I should slap the crazy out of him!! As a matter of fact... let me do that? A normal Drake would b splendid! ^_^ *sips tea in hopes that Marty takes up mi offer* You got me contradictin miself Marty!! LmASSo!!! Damn u!! I hated this chapter which is why I LOVED it!!! U got skills! Lol

    Post shoon! :p *waits with brass knuckles nd Louisville slugger*

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  7. Fuck tiuch screen keypads -_- most of those i's should b o's..... Damn typo's...

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  8. When Nicki has the babies, she needs to find Melanie and woop her a$$ a$$ a$$ a$$! I'm glad Safaree told her off, but he has Nicki. He shuld try to track the phone tht Melanie used to call him. And I drake is a desperate dumbass in this story. -__-.

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  9. Martha!!!! THIS WAS A FUCKING MOVIE! You had me in tears girl. Every scene played vividly in my head. Now this Melanie bitch done fucked up! Blowing smoke in her face, Slapping my Nicki and putting the blade to her face? OH HELL NO! This bitch is completely deranged. Safaree don't want you BITCH! Realize that! I mean it's quite obvious where his heart is. Then Drake's dumb ass was in on it. You dumb monkey ass nigga! UGH! I AM PISSED. How the fuck you help get her in the situation & then you wanna try and help? No Nigga! Your ass will pay too! Fuck you think this is. You wolf lion. -__-
    I'm glad everyone was at the house with Safaree because they were concerned. I hope they figure out something soon. Poor Mama Carol :'( This was saddddd! But Mr. Robert had me crying when he told Safaree he smelled like the dead! lmaooooooooooooo I was rollin!!!!!
    Oh and when that bitch put the gun to Nic's , I was in tears. She better not hurt Nicki or those babies. This was so good Martha! I can't wait to see what happens next. Excuse any typos, I don't feel like retyping this!
    P.S. Post sooner than later please! xoxo

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  10. Oh and Sb that's nasty...I know it's a tough situation, but please...don't go a day without taking a shower. You MUST wash them balls, wash them balls bay boy! -_-

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  11. Martha your doing great and the suspense is awesome! Keep up the great work! ...omggg nickiiii :( drake *rolls eyes* see what happens wen u involve crazy bitches.. But all I'm thinking is plzz let nicki and the babies stay safe! & plz wen Safaree gets her back dont let nicki blame him :( and push him away again.. But omg lawwwd

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  12. OH HELL NO!!!!!!! I AM LIVID TO THE HIGHEST POINT OF PISSTIVITY RIGHT NOW!!

    WHO THIS BITCH THINK SHE IS BLOWING SMOKE IN A PREGNANT WOMAN'S FACE?! DO SHE NOT KNOW I WILL SNATCH HER WIG, ROOTS AND SCALP?!?!?! >:O

    AWWW SAFAREE DON'T BLAME YOURSELF BAE EVEN THO YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE LEFT HER... IT'S NOT YOUR FAULT... WELL IT KINDA IS BUT IT ISN'T IN A WAY IF THAT MAKES SENSE? :|

    THIS WILLY MAMMOTH CROSSBREED WITH A SLOTH ASS NINJA DRAKE IF HE DON'T GET A CHAIR AND HAVE SEVERAL FUCKING SEATS IN DEGRASSI HIGH SCHOOL'S AUDITORIUM I'MA KICK HIS ASS!!
    HOW YOU GONNA BE IN ON THE SHIT THEN WANNA BITCH UP AND HELP NOW THAT YOU FEEL BAD?! GET THE FUCK OUTTA HERE!

    HONESTLY I WAS HOPING MEL POPPED A CAP IN HIS ASS IT'S NOT LIKE JIMMY ISN'T USED TO GETTING SHOT ANYHOW *FLIPS HAIR* DID YA'LL CATCH ALL THAT SHADE? LMAOOOOOOOO

    GREAT CHAPTER MARTHA YOU HAD ME AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT... POST SOON!

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  13. Great work. But I'm getting pissed this crazy girl has my Nic and her babies. I mean Drake dumbass partner up with Melanie to have Nic listen to what the fuck he has to say. He still didn't get his point across telling Nic he wants her to listen. This woman is pregnant and tied up. If he didn't want to see Nic being treated like that he could've slapped that hoe Melanie and get Nic out. I'm MF pissed she has her crusty ass hands on Nic. I can't wait til Nic is rescued and SB beats the shit out of her. -_-

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  14. It was worth the wait can't wait for what happens next. ^_^

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  15. OH MY FUCKIN GOD!!!!!! IM STILL STUCK ON THIS PSYCHO BITCH HAVIN A GUN !!!!! THIS SHIT JUST GOT REAL *KEVIN HART VOICE* ...!!!! OH HELLLL , NICKI WAS ALMOST OUT , THEN HERE GO LIL KIM LOOKIN AHH BITCH !!! AHHHH , BUT IM GLAD MR. MARAJ , WAS SORTA COOL , AND OMGGGGG !!! NO THIS BITCH AINT SLAP MY NICKI, I STARTED TO COME THRU THIS COMP , BUT I WAS LIKE NAW THIS BITCH , CRAZY , SHE MIGHT KILL ME , NND I WONT KNOW WHAT HAPPENS ON THE NEXT CHAPTER...o_o ... BUT OMG ....

    YOUR DOING GREAT , AND THIS SUSPENSE WAS EPIC AH FUCK !!!! I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER BARB !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *HIDES BEHING BG*

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  16. ooh , and by the way NO THIS BITCH AINT HAVE A KNIFE ON NICKI THROAT ...I WILL CU HER *BONQUIQUI VOICE*

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  17. OMG this bitch done lost her fuckn mind.. and Drake bitch ass.. ugh smdh, i hope everything be ok, i hope Nicki dont get to stressed *prays for Nicki and the babies*

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  18. @MELANIE BITCH I WILL SKIN YOU WITH A FUCKING BUTTER KNIFE, PULL YOUR HAIR FROM YOUR SCALP BY SMALL BUNDLES, STICK MATCH STICKS INTO YOUR MUSCLES AND FLESH, LIGHT THEM ND WATCH THEM BURN OUT, SMASH YOUR FINGERS AND TOES ONE BY FUCKING ONE WITH A HAMMER. BITCH I WILL USE FISH HOOKS TO HOLD YOUR EYELIDS BACK AND STICK NEEDLES INTO YOUR FUCKING EYES, POUR ACID ON YOU IN THE PLACES OF MY CHOICE THEN PEPPER AND SALT ALL YOUR FUCKING ASS AND WATCH YOU FUCKING SUFFER!!!!! WHO THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOU ARE?? HUH BITCH?? HUH?? BITCH YOU BETTER TAKE HER HOME NOW AND SAFELY. YOU KNOW SAFELY, SECURE FROM DANGER, HARM OR EVIL. YOU DONT KNOW WHO THE FUCK YOU'RE FUCKING WITH!! AND WHEN I COUNT EVERY STRAND OF HAIR BETTER BE ON HER HEAD! AND SHE BET NOT HAVE ANY MARKS ON HER!! BITCH YOU FUCKING WITH THE WRONG ONE!!! BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTCHHHH!!! IMA GET YOUR ASS!!!

    *TAKES LONG, SLOW, DEEP REATH* PAUZ.

    Maaaaaaaaaaaarrrrtttttthhhhhhhhhhhhaaaa!!! *taps foot* FIX FIX FIX!!! NOWINGTON!! Or she just gon mysteriously die in one of these chapters without you writing it..

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  19. Ok I know I commented 3 days ago but I HAVE SOMETHING ELSE 2 SAY. When Nicki has her beautiful babies...She BETTA beat up on MelHoenie's A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ A$$ 4 REAL...UGH..Is there a way for me to enter this stoty cuz..Tuh! Nic shall NOT let her get away w/ this unharmed..if not ALIVE!!! Ive been ovr this physcotic liddle girl...she must exit NOW!!! BYE BXTCH! -__- K! I just had to vent..I'm done! Post Soon ;)

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  20. *story*……this touchscreen<<<<<<<

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  21. Let me tell sumthing..you know what you're doing with this story Martha and NOO it's not bored at all..you might think that cuz it had an abrupt change but I'm loving it :D

    Anyway, Ewww Safaree betta wash those balls If he smells like the dead imagine how does he smells inside his pants?

    Who the fuck this chicken head think she is slappin Nicki with her nasty and crusty ass hands she needs to die..I already told you how ;)

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  22. I;m at the highest pisstivity right now....
    I cant even do a proper review...im at the point where my finger are tensing up everytime i think about it.
    Ans btw ur doing GREAT!
    Drake you sick ass whole MELANIE YOU RETARDED FUCKING DICK FACED THIRSTY BITCH!!! CRAZED SCYCO!

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  23. I have no words. Melanie just....girl...

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